Good idea

Here is an article that I found about a surprize wedding by a bride for her groom. You can read about it at http://www.nytimes.com/2007/04/22/fashion/weddings/22vows.html?_r=1&ref=style&oref=slogin.

I thought this article had an interesting title and it seemed like it would be a cute story. It was only partly interesting. The story behind it all was good, but the way the writer presented it was long and choppy. Even though the headline made you believe that this would be about a surprize wedding for a groom by the bride, it took until the very end of the article to get that across.

The article did do a good job at being a feature story. It was filled with lots of little details, but the details were not really connected to each other, and almost went too in depth.

It was a good story, but like o.k. movies, I wouldn't ever have to read it again.