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Monday, February 05, 2007

How wow?

Here is the article I wrote about; which talks about the new Microsoft Vista.
http://www.nytimes.com/2007/02/05/technology/05microsoft.html?_r=1&ref=technology&oref=slogin

I think that the writer did a good job at the lead for this article. He(she) starts off with a flair lead that talks about the commercials that Microsoft has used to promote its new product. The commercial uses the term "wow", but the writer rebuttles that and says that it wasn't a wow. He then goes into talking about a comparison between Windows 95 and Vista. It is a lengthy summary, but a good one. The information is vital to back up his claim. All in all, I think that this writer did a good job at taking a claim and using good, understandable, facts for the reader to gain more knowledge from.

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