Voicemails for newspapers on-line

Here is a story about the posting of voicemails, more like hate mails, from readers of the San Francisco Chronical. You can read it fully at http://www.nytimes.com/2007/01/29/business/media/29gate.html?_r=1&ref=technology&oref=slogin.

This story does a good job with the lead. It catches the attention of the readers and introduces exactly what the story is about within the first two sentances.

This story was made to be just a small excerpt and that is all that it is. It gives minimal information about one newspaper, gives only a couple quotes from one person, and only uses one example. It felt like it was lacking something after the lead, but I think that has something to do with the size of the story.

I think that this story could be further developed and could really use some more examples from around the United States, not just one newspaper.